Tuesday, December 18, 2012

20-page MG or YA Manuscript Critique (Author Robin Mellom)

Author Robin Mellom has offer a 20-page MG/YA critique.  The highest bidder will win the following package:
  • If you are writing humorous middle grade or young adult, I will critique and give feedback on your work up to 20 pages. 
  • My goal is to focus on making sure the humor is shining though, the dialog is snappy, and then give you ideas on how to get your beginning pages ready so you're sure to get the attention of an editor or agent!
Opening Bid: 25$

Please bid in increments of 5$ and include your bid in the comments below.

The auction will start Tuesday (Dec 18th) at 9 AM EST (6 AM EST) 

The auction will end Thursday, Dec 20th at Noon EST (9 AM PT).

Auction Procedures:

If you’d like to bid on this auction, check the current high bid in the comments and place a higher bid by leaving your name and bid amount in the comments, along with some way to contact you (email, FB or Twitter).
Winners will be notified when the auction ends and should be prepared to make an online donation withing 48 hours of winning  After you’ve made your donation, you’ll forward your receipt to me, and I’ll put you in touch with the person who donated the service you won so that the two of you can work out the details about how and when.   
All services will be provided at the convenience of both the person making the donation and the auction winner, but this should happen within three months of the auction’s end unless something else is agreed upon by both parties.
Good luck!

Author Robin Mellom

Robin is the author of the teen romantic comedy DITCHED: A LOVE STORY and the middle grade series THE CLASSROOM: THE EPIC DOCUMENTARY OF A NOT-YET-EPIC KID, both published by Disney-Hyperion.


  1. Thank you to everyone for bidding. Mary you win for $35. You will receive an email with instructions shortly! :)