Tuesday, December 18, 2012

Query/15-page MS Critique with phone call (Agent Susan Hawk)

Agent Susan Hawk has donated a critique of a query letter and the first 15 pages. The highest bidder will get the following package:  
  • A critique of a query letter 
  • The first 15 pages of your manuscript
  • The writer and I will schedule a phone call for the critique.       

Opening Bid: 25$

Round bid up to the nearest $5 amount. For ex: if you want to bid 33$, pleases bid 35$. It make sit easier for us. :) Include your bid in the comments below. The auction will start Tuesday (Dec 18th) at 9 AM EST (6 AM EST) and end Fri, Dec 21st at 11:59 PM EST (9 PM PT).

Auction Procedures:

If you’d like to bid on this auction, check the current high bid in the comments and place a higher bid by leaving your name and bid amount in the comments, along with some way to contact you (email).
Winners will be notified when the auction ends and should be prepared to make an online donation withing 48 hours of winning  After you’ve made your donation, you’ll forward your receipt to me, and I’ll put you in touch with the person who donated the service you won so that the two of you can work out the details about how and when.   
All services will be provided at the convenience of both the person making the donation and the auction winner, but this should happen within three months of the auction’s end unless something else is agreed upon by both parties.
Good luck!

Agent Susan Hawk

Susan Hawk is an agent at The Bent Agency, where she represents books for children -- picture books, chapter books, middle grade and YA fiction as well as non-fiction for kids.  Right now, she's particularly interested in a great mystery, a book that will make her laugh out loud, and in thrilling historical fiction.  Regardless of genre, she falls in love with fantastic characters first.  For more information, check the agency website: http://www.thebentagency.com/about.html.



  1. $25
    Email: amy@pineshome.com
    twitter: Amy_LovesYA

  2. Nadine Johnson


  3. Nadine Johnson


  4. Replies
    1. Congratulations. I don't think I got my bid in in time. :)

    2. Thanks, Carla. It was soooo close. ;)

  5. you didn't carla :(

    great race you guys

    ronnie you are the winner. Kate will be emailing you instructions!

    Thank you so much