Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Manuscript Critique - First 30 Pages and swag (Author Rachele Alpine)

Author Rachele Alpine has offered a 30-page manuscript critique. The highest bidder will win the following package:
  • First 30 pages manuscript critique by Rachele Alpine (Often when agents request a partial, they want to see your first 30 pages. I’m donating a critique of your first 30 pages to make sure your manuscript is query ready! This critique will include comments as I’m reading and feedback on the piece as a whole. )
  • I will also throw in a CANARY swag pack of goodies.

Opening Bid: 25$

Please bid in increments of 5$ and include your bid in the comments below. The auction will start Wed (Dec 19th) at 9 AM EST (6 AM EST) and end Friday, Dec 21st at Noon EST (9 AM PT).

Auction Procedures:

If you’d like to bid on this auction, check the current high bid in the comments and place a higher bid by leaving your name and bid amount in the comments, along with some way to contact you (email, FB or Twitter).
Winners will be notified when the auction ends and should be prepared to make an online donation withing 48 hours of winning  After you’ve made your donation, you’ll forward your receipt to me, and I’ll put you in touch with the person who donated the service you won so that the two of you can work out the details about how and when.   
All services will be provided at the convenience of both the person making the donation and the auction winner, but this should happen within three months of the auction’s end unless something else is agreed upon by both parties.
Good luck!

Rachele Alpine is a high school teacher by day, a MFA fiction writing student by night and use any free time in between to write, write, write! Her debut novel CANARY is coming out August 2013.

She blogs at:



  1. $40 writing(at)marlenemoss(dot)com

  2. Thank you to everyone for bidding. GSMarlene you win for $40. You will receive an email with instructions shortly! :)